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BACKGROUND: Boris, lover of all things American, who has lived in New York for years, is deported. He is sent back to his horrible birthplace Bulvakia.



               EXT. BULVAKIA PORT - DAY

               Boris gets off a rickety boat. He looks haggard with a 40
               o'clock shadow. He clutches a burlap sack to his chest as if
               his life depended on it.

               Damn, BULVAKIANS are poor. And not happy poor, like Cubans.
               Miserable, rotten-teeth poor. Like even making the effort to
               commit suicide would just get them into a shitty heaven.

               COUSIN NIMBUS (30, rough and brown-toothed) talks to a SLAVE
               TRADER (40) who dresses well and has a gold chain hanging
               from his vest pocket, chest puffed like a peacock.

                                   SLAVE TRADER
                         I didn't like the boys you got me
                         last time. Too weak. They can
                         hardly do the work of one mule
                         each. You hit them too hard.

                                   NIMBUS
                         Kidnapping is tough business these
                         days.

                                   SLAVE TRADER
                         Well, next time, I think you'll do
                         better.

                                   NIMBUS
                         I will?

               Slave Trader belts Nimbus in the mouth. Nimbus spits out
               brown teeth. His front teeth, all gone.

                                   SLAVE TRADER
                         You'd better do better, or other
                         parts of you will break off piece
                         by piece.

               Nimbus looks down at his teeth. Bye, bye, teeth.



               EXT. BULVAKIA - DAY

               Boris walks purposefully through the streets, a bright white
               smile highlighting his face as he continues to clutch his
               sack to him.

               But as he continues to walk, sweat, and squint into the harsh
               sun, his smile slowly disappears.



               EXT. BORIS'S CHILDHOOD SHACK - DAY

               Sopping wet from sweat, Boris sees a pile of rubble, or
               rather, odd bits of canvas cloth, metal siding, stones,
               and...

               He bends down to a cracked, dust-covered T.V.

                                   BORIS
                         Not the T.V.

               He spies the VCR.

                                   BORIS (CONT'D)
                         Not the VCR, where I spent many an
                         hour watching American sitcoms to
                         learn English to escape from this
                         miserable place.

               He spies a finger with a meager diamond ring on it. He picks
               it up.

                                   BORIS (CONT'D)
                         Mama!

               He throws his hands up in the air and loses the finger. His
               voice echoes through the dry, dusty air.

               Nimbus approaches, sees the unguarded sack, grabs it, and
               runs.

               Boris does a quick search for the finger/ring then takes off
               after Nimbus.

                                   BORIS (CONT'D)
                         Cousin Nimbus. Bring my sack back,
                         you son of a cow hoof trimmer!

               Nimbus is fast. But so is Boris. Boris tackles Nimbus.

               The sack hits the ground and spills dirt, little blocks of
               cement, and some junk.

                                   NIMBUS
                         What is that?

                                   BORIS
                         You knew it was me?

                                   NIMBUS
                         We're cousins. Of course I knew who
                         you were. But you had something to
                         steal, so I stole it.

               Boris settles down beside the spillage. He picks up a handful
               of dirt, letting it fall down his face through his fingers.

                                   BORIS
                         This is a part of my home.

                                   NIMBUS
                         You lived in a cave?

                                   BORIS
                         No, it's American soil. And this is
                         a piece of cement, and a plastic
                         wrapper from the grass in Central
                         Park where joggers jog, children
                         laugh, and you can get good
                         falafel.

                                   NIMBUS
                         What's falafel?

                                   BORIS
                         That's the great thing about
                         America. Food from everywhere; it's
                         a microcosm of the whole world.

                                   NIMBUS
                         What's microcosm?

                                   BORIS
                         A miniature version of the world.

                                   NIMBUS
                         Things are smaller there?

                                   BORIS
                         No, Nimbus.

               Boris picks some dirt from his white teeth.

                                   NIMBUS
                         Hey, who painted your teeth white?

                                   BORIS
                         It is what I saved my first many
                         paychecks for. I almost starved to
                         death, but one by one, I became an
                         American.

               INSERT: One tooth by one tooth, Boris gets a Hollywood smile.

               Nimbus fingers his lack of teeth.

                                   NIMBUS
                         What kind of paint did they use?

                                   BORIS
                         What happened to Mama's home?

                                   NIMBUS
                         You set it on fire.

                                   BORIS
                         What?

                                   NIMBUS
                         Officially, in the official
                         records, you officially set your
                         house on fire. Which is punishable
                         by death by beheading, of course.

                                   BORIS
                         But I haven't been here in five
                         years.

                                   NIMBUS
                         Details, cousin.

                                   BORIS
                         And what of my mother? Why was her
                         finger still in the house?

                                   NIMBUS
                         That's where it ended up after I
                         cut it off.

                                   BORIS
                         You cut it off!

                                   NIMBUS
                         She was dead. She had no head. To
                         protect the family treasure, I cut
                         it off. But it flew off somewhere.
                         I couldn't find it. So where is it?

                                   BORIS
                         I lost it.

                                   NIMBUS
                         It doesn't want to be found.
                         Curses, you finger with a mind.

                                   BORIS
                         What happened to your teeth?

                                   NIMBUS
                         What teeth?

                                   BORIS
                         The teeth that you used to have.

                                   NIMBUS
                         They're gone.

               Nimbus starts to walk away but stops.

                                   NIMBUS (CONT'D)
                         Let's dine tonight to celebrate
                         your return.

                                   BORIS
                         I don't know if I'll be good
                         company.

                                   NIMBUS
                         I'm the only blood you got, Boris.
                         Your mom, your pop, dead. Your
                         brother, your sister, died before
                         their third birthdays. Everyone
                         else, killed in the war.

                                   BORIS
                         What war?

                                   NIMBUS
                         Street warfare, man. My brother got
                         mowed down. By a lawn mower. Really
                         disgusting. He was in so much pain
                         I had to finish him off myself.
                         Bless his girlfriend-stealing soul.
                         But enough of that. Get cleaned up.
                         I'll meet you there.
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